Here's take 2 of "Overture 1928":
Compare to take 1.
I sped up the playback a bit for this one. Still 20% slower than the original. Seems much better than the first one. You can see me trying to unlock my pinky around :36, kinda funny, missed a chord because of it.
It's mostly those same few tough licks holding me back on speed, especially at 2:25. Everything else is just about there. Still working on those licks every day though, so they'll come around eventually.